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Friday, February 10, 2012

Freedoms

I have been really, really, busy recently so I have posted on here in a while, sorry. This poem is called "Freedoms", and is just a sort of randomish thing that I came up with while thinking about all the new internet censorship bills recently. It isn't my best poem, but I kind of like it. Enjoy and tell me what you think!

You take our freedoms,
claim its for the general
GOOD.
Yet if no one has freedom,
then who benefits?

Getting paid off to
serve corporations.
The People give you your
JOB,
and you spit in their
FACE.
You truly are an utter
DISGRACE;
to humanity,
in everything you
DO.
You truly serve
the people,
NOT.
Instead, you have
wrought humans with
immeasurable suffering.
I cannot believe you have
COME
up and stabbed us in the
BACK, such a cowardly attack.
Trying to hold us down
FROM
taking what is ours.
We will not allow
you to make our lives
HELL.


So, what do you think? Also, the capitalized words are there for a reason, try reading them only in order ;).

6 comments:

  1. I like the message in caps as well as the whole pattern and theme. Glad you're on the good side.

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    1. Thanks, it is a new thing I was trying was not really sure how it would turn out! Also, it is good to be on the good side :).

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  2. That's really nice :) I love writing poetry!

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